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Wanted to paint something and practice realism. ^^
Umm hopefully the colors is okay, I drew this in about 2.5 hrs with photoshop CS3.

Need moar practice! +_+

*Critiques are welcomed!

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:icondazzlingdebbie2009:
The red hair reminds me of the woman who got me into
DA, Sharon43210, a redhead herself.

So many talented people!
:icondarkshia:
Ooo wow! Haha, I wanted to try drawing someone with red hair for once. :D
Welcome to DA by the way!
Thank you so much!

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(´・ω・`) 阿阿阿....

不要放棄你的夢想
:iconlehua:
aww her eyes look sooo nice! very nice for a practice ^^
:iconrebel-chan:
I think her nose nostrils aren't defined as they should be, they're very tiny and with her face position you should be able to see her nostrils, the only pose that doesn't include nostrils is when a person is looking down.

Also the hair doesn't reflect the light source, from what I can see, the LS comes from the upper left and the hair makes it seem like it's coming from above.

her eyes also lack the right amount of light, I can see the small light on the side of her eye, but its not consistant with the light source. the LS is a very bright light, so the eyes would reflect it more.

the eyebrows are also too short and too close to the eyes, they have to be higher and not connected into the eyes. I gave you a lot of critique lol, but it's only because I want you to get better and not stay stagnant, don't get mad at me katie >.<

this is a good practice, and you will only get better. I will not hesitate to critique you though, just warning you LOL.

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These are the pieces of my youth, The small secrets and not-so-great expectations that defined my coming of age." - Daniel Armand Lee
:icondazzlingdebbie2009:
Thank you, I am enjoying being here.
Sharon was so right!
Scarlet Ambition was not kidding.
:icondarkshia:
Thank you very much! >w< But.. she looks lifeless O.O

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(´・ω・`) 阿阿阿....

不要放棄你的夢想
:iconhaydenm:
I think it's a pretty good for someone just getting into the subject. It'll get easier with time :nod:
:iconflutterby727:
I think it's a pretty good practice, though I would say that her hair needs some darker shading to define it more

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Good artists are crappy artists who never gave up.
:icondarkshia:
Haha Thank you very much!
I don't mind at all since I really need crtiques.
D: I knew there was something wrong with the nose ;_;
I'll go practice more +_+~

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(´・ω・`) 阿阿阿....

不要放棄你的夢想

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